Minions of the Watch

Set Abominae · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:21 am Post subject: Something Wicked story?

I don't know if anyone is working on one right now, but as of today I am henceforth working on a story based on the Something Wicked albums. Of course, I'll start from the beginning, as I can't really work on Part II until it is released. I've divided the story as follows [all chapters/titles subject to change]:

Prologue
Part I - Framing Armageddon
Chapter 1 - Prophecy
Chapter 2 - Invasion
Chapter 3 - War [may divide this chapter further, I'll decide when I get there]
Chapter 4 - Order of the Rose
Chapter 5 - The Clouding
Chapter 6 - Hidden Plot [iffy title; probably will change later]
Chapter 7 - The Domino Decree [this may be joined with the next chapter]
Chapter 8 - Framing Armageddon
Chapter 9 - When Stars Collide
Part II - The Crucible of Man
Chapter 10 - Birth of the Wicked
Chapter 11 - Minions of the Watch [I have to! ; )]
Chapter 12 - The Revealing
Chapter 13 - He Walks
Chapter 14 - Crucify the King
Chapter 15 - Divide and Devour
Chapter 16 - Come What May
Epilogue

If you have any suggestions, tips, helpful hints, criticisms, or anything that could help me, please reply.

Oh, and no, I have no plans to publish this story, unless I am asked by Jon Schaffer himself.
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Kanadwen · OM NOM NOM NOM Joined: 17 Jul 2008 Posts: 653

I'm confused!
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The Sexiest Metalhead · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:22 am Post subject:

Tainted Innocence · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:18 am Post subject:

Chapter 10 - Birth of the Wicked
Chapter 11 - The revealing
Chapter 12 - Minions of the watch

that looks better eh?
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Kanadwen · OM NOM NOM NOM Joined: 17 Jul 2008 Posts: 653

Are you just outlining the story, or putting songs in order? Confffffffffffffused!
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Set Abominae · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 2:59 am Post subject:

The Wicked One · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 5:37 am Post subject:

I have a general idea of what he wants.

Well, Id say skip Stars Collide Chapter since the Birth would be more important than repeating yourself from Framing's plot.

other than that, i think that Jon already has some1 with an idea or connections to have comics made.
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Set Abominae · Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:23 pm Post subject:

As Tainted and The Wicked One have suggested, I have added the chapter "The Revealing" and removed the chapter "When Stars Collide....".

I have finished the prologue and am currently working on Chapter 1. When it is finished, I will put it up here.

As always, keep the criticisms, comments, and suggestions coming.
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Fallen from grace cuz I've been away too long
Leaving you behind with my lonesome song
Now I'm lost in oblivion

Tainted Innocence · Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:58 am Post subject:

swap chapters 4 & 6 then rename "hidden plot" to "hidden beast"
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Set Abominae · Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:07 am Post subject: