Something Wicked story?

Set Abominae · Something Wicked story?

I don't know if anyone is working on one right now, but as of today I am henceforth working on a story based on the Something Wicked albums. Of course, I'll start from the beginning, as I can't really work on Part II until it is released. I've divided the story as follows [all chapters/titles subject to change]:

Prologue
Part I - Framing Armageddon
Chapter 1 - Prophecy
Chapter 2 - Invasion
Chapter 3 - War [may divide this chapter further, I'll decide when I get there]
Chapter 4 - Order of the Rose
Chapter 5 - The Clouding
Chapter 6 - Hidden Plot [iffy title; probably will change later]
Chapter 7 - The Domino Decree [this may be joined with the next chapter]
Chapter 8 - Framing Armageddon
Chapter 9 - When Stars Collide
Part II - The Crucible of Man
Chapter 10 - Birth of the Wicked
Chapter 11 - Minions of the Watch [I have to! ; )]
Chapter 12 - The Revealing
Chapter 13 - He Walks
Chapter 14 - Crucify the King
Chapter 15 - Divide and Devour
Chapter 16 - Come What May
Epilogue

If you have any suggestions, tips, helpful hints, criticisms, or anything that could help me, please reply.

Oh, and no, I have no plans to publish this story, unless I am asked by Jon Schaffer himself.

Kanadwen

I'm confused!

The Sexiest Metalhead

Tainted Innocence

Chapter 10 - Birth of the Wicked
Chapter 11 - The revealing
Chapter 12 - Minions of the watch

that looks better eh?

Kanadwen

Are you just outlining the story, or putting songs in order? Confffffffffffffused!

Set Abominae

The Wicked One

I have a general idea of what he wants.

Well, Id say skip Stars Collide Chapter since the Birth would be more important than repeating yourself from Framing's plot.

other than that, i think that Jon already has some1 with an idea or connections to have comics made.

Set Abominae

As Tainted and The Wicked One have suggested, I have added the chapter "The Revealing" and removed the chapter "When Stars Collide....".

I have finished the prologue and am currently working on Chapter 1. When it is finished, I will put it up here.

As always, keep the criticisms, comments, and suggestions coming.

Tainted Innocence

swap chapters 4 & 6 then rename "hidden plot" to "hidden beast"

Set Abominae

Tainted Innocence

=D

btw if you need any help with the actual story let me know.

Set Abominae

Tainted Innocence

nice.

Set Abominae

Chapter 1 - Arrival has been added. The prologue is now entitled "Prologue - Prophecy".

This chapter is, I'll admit, dull. But do not worry. As the story progresses it will get better. In any book/story/whatever, the story in the beginning is boring and dull. And the ones that aren't, the authors end up rushing and heightening the plot to quickly. I want this story to be as good as it can be, so stay tuned in.

http://www.freewebs.com/somethingwicked

Sentinel

Just read the Prologue and Chapter I, and I must say it's pretty cool, great work!

Tainted Innocence

good story,
but its a tad hard to read.

soo maybe try to not switch back and forth soo much?

but either way it's alot better then i could do.

Set Abominae

Feanìs

well I read some parts few minutes ago, it HAS potantial, don't stop now, go on...., I'll await the book when it's published (of corse after Schaffer gave his okay) Wink

Set Abominae

Chapter 2 - Setian Massacre has finally been added. Sorry for the long delay. Spread the word about the story, I'll keep it up now!

Set Abominae

I hate to say, but my Something Wicked story has been put on hold. I start college on Monday and I've been very busy with friends and other things. Until further notice, this has been put on hold.

Sorry guys Crying or Very sad

Dante

Feanìs

sad, but your reasons are good ones....